Comments on: Can you write a good headline? – 1st place wins a full website analysis from me!

By: Jason

Jason — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 03:32:40 +0000

I know I am well past the date but could use the practice. I only have a month to draw clients into my new studio and I am new to internet advertising.
1 – Why waste hundreds of dollars and long hours at the gym when you could lose weight and improve your physique for only $37.

2 – Do you want to put over $250 back in your pocket, lose weight and build a beach body without leaving home.

By: Mike

Mike — Mon, 17 Nov 2008 15:51:19 +0000

“Learn what the Fitness Gurus are Desperately Trying to Hide… we Reveal the Effortless Home Workout Plan that will Mold you into a Sculpted, Lean Machine in only Three Days a Week”

I know I’m a little late Jusin, but wanted to give some input

BTW this is themike537 from PAP.

By: Sarah Palin

Sarah Palin — Sun, 16 Nov 2008 06:02:01 +0000

Congrats fitness dude! You are going to be learning from the best.

By: justin

justin — Wed, 12 Nov 2008 18:01:45 +0000

Congrats Fitness dude for writing the best headline!

Very specific and attention grabbing

I’ll be in contact with you soon!

By: Fitness dude

Fitness dude — Tue, 11 Nov 2008 21:07:55 +0000

Jeff here

Took me a while to come up witht this but I like it…

“Introducing a brand new workout that will give you better looking arms, legs, pecs and stomach muscles with just three workouts per week – without going to the gym”

By: j

Tue, 11 Nov 2008 07:12:24 +0000

“No time or money to get in shape? Try (insert workout program name)”

By: Sharan D.

Sharan D. — Tue, 11 Nov 2008 03:48:03 +0000

Thanks for the contest Justin! I”ll give it a try

“Are you tired of your long boring cardio workouts? Well stop now.. and discover how to torch body fat and build muscle with simple, 10 minute workouts in the comfort of your own living room!”

Hope ya like it…

-Sharan

By: Paul Riester

Paul Riester — Mon, 10 Nov 2008 22:37:51 +0000

“How would you like to lose 15 lbs of body fat in the next month by working out less, and never having to drive to a smelly, sweaty gym?”

-Paul

By: Chris

Chris — Mon, 10 Nov 2008 22:34:34 +0000

“If you can give me just 20 minutes, 3X per week… I’ll help you lose 12 lbs of stubborn body fat”

By: Dave

Dave — Mon, 10 Nov 2008 20:47:07 +0000

CRUNCHed for Time? Cut Calories From the Comfort of your Own Home with These Short (and Killer) Workouts